Hey Pink !
How boring it is here without you!
I miss your pink wooden skin,
I miss your 6 straight strings,
I miss your clear sound,
And I miss your best friend Gibson too.
When I arrive at home,
I may see you covered with dust.
Look very tired,
Look very old,
And, look very lonely
You were the only one
who cheered me up,
who laughed together,
who cried together.
But as I feel a little
depressed in here,
I can always feel
an empty space next to me.
I can still remember
the days we ran to school in the morning,
the days we went on the stage together about a hundred times,
the days we listened people cheering at us,
the days we walked together in the park very quietly.
I wish to see you very soon,
and I am not going to leave you alone like this again too.
Thank you for many things Pinky ^^
I love you!
-From 미르-
Mireu,
답글삭제What a great job you have done on this ode. You used pictures to make the post look good, you used descriptive language to make the ode poetic and you used personifications. Excellent job! I hope to hear you play Pinky one day!
Hi!
답글삭제This is a well-written ode to your guitar, Pinky. It should be very boring without your guitar in GLPS. You made great use of descriptive language such as personifications and metaphors. Also, the pictures made your ode more interesting. Keep up the good work~
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답글삭제I think your blog background is very cool, too. I think your ode is very very good!!